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We’re on our way to the Elite Four. Beat Misty’s Gym today and we now have a Cascade Badge. Mel took out Misty’s trainers, with Katie and Max as back up.

“Do we want to battle Misty yet?” Jon asked.

“Come on, let me take ‘er.” Wayne urged. 

“You need to level up before we take on Misty.” I said. “Come on, Route 24 will work.” We spent the afternoon training, mostly taking out weedles and oddish. Wayne worked hard to level up and at three o'clock we headed back to the gym. “Alright Wayne, you take on her staryu.”

“What about her starmie?”

“Use Poison Powder, then switch out. Katie, do you feel comfortable going out?”

“Sure. As long as Jon backs me up.”

“I’m game.”

“That’s a good plan. None of her water type move will do much.”

I looked at my team. “So, Wayne, Katie and Jon, be ready. Max and Mel, doesn’t look like you’ll be in this battle.”

“That’s fine.” Max still seemed upset. Mel just nodded.

Misty was losing a battle when we came in. It wasn’t long before we heard the trainer saying, “Smell ya later.”

“I hate him.” Jon muttered.

I didn’t say anything, but I agreed. I didn’t look at him as he passed, all I was concerned with was beating Misty. 

“I guess you want to battle too?” Misty asked as I stepped up.

“Yes.”

“Give me a moment, I need to heal my pokemon.”

“O.K.”

She smiled and went into a back room. I took the opportunity to make sure all my stuff was ready, but was interrupted by a tug on my pants. 

“Yeah Max?”

“I want to go before Katie.”

“Max are you sure?”

“Yes.” The light in her eyes was so harsh, I realized she still needed to let of steam from Colbert’s death.

“Alright, but be careful.”

“Don’t worry,” she whispered, “it’s in my nature.”

Misty came back out then and smiled. “Well you know who I am, but I haven’t had the pleasure.”

“Lisa.”

“Well Lisa, let’s battle.” and without missing a beat, she released her staryu.

“Just like we talked about Wayne.” He nodded as he waddled out to the field.

“Staryu, Harden!”

“Bullet Seed, Wayne!” and like that it began. Her staryu didn’t last long, but that didn’t matter, because her starmie more than made up for it. Wayne blasted a puff of Poison Powder at it then scurried back as Max jumped out. Unfortunately, Max was not faster than the starmie, and Swift after Swift hit Max. I healed her a couple times, but finally called her back, Katie taking her place. “Thanks Max.”

“I didn’t do anything.”

“You took up some time. That starmie’s weaker now because of that poisoning thanks to you. Katie, Confusion!”

The starmie sent Water Pulses after Katie. I healed her once and she tried to confuse the starmie with Supersonic before she switched out with Jon. “Sorry it didn’t work.” She whispered to Jon.

“Don’t worry about it.” The starmie was tottering from weakness now.

“Finish it Jon!” The Water Pulse that hit him critted. “Jon?”

“I’m fine!”

“OK. Bite!” He launched forward through the Swift stars and Bit two of the starmie’s arms. He jumped back towards me and I sprayed him quickly with a super potion. Misty’s starmie sent one last volley of stars at Jon then fainted. “Yes! We did it!”

Misty smiled, sending her stamie back into it’s ball. “Well done. You’ve earned this.” She tossed me a tiny blue water drop. “You can use Cut outside of battle now. Oh, and take this,” She threw a TM to me. “It’s Water Pulse. Your wartortle could do some damage with that.”

“Thank you.”

“Good luck. Lt. Surge hits hard.” She called after me as I left.

“So what now?” Wayne asked.

“Let’s get something to eat. We’ll head out in the morning.”

We found a small café and ordered a big meal. “Feeling better?” Jon whispered between bites.

“Yeah. Thanks Jon.”

“No problem. We just got to keep going.”

We finished at the café, but only after leaving a huge mess, and went back to the Pokémon Center. “Next stop,” I yawned as I squirmed into my sleeping bag, “Vermillion City.”

So you may notice that my Nuzlocke story is gone. Well, that's because I deleted it to update with a new version. Basically, I played to far in the game and didn't keep up with my writing. So yeah, just to let you know. My starter may be different this time around, we'll see. I'll keep better track of my game this time.
  • Mood: Cheerful
  • Reading: Game of Thrones
  • Playing: Pokemon X and Pokemon FireRed

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Eveki Clival
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United States
Current Residence: CA
Favourite genre of music: Alternative, Country, Big Band
Operating System: Mac
MP3 player of choice: Ipod
Favourite cartoon character: Yakko Warner, Leonard Church, Leonardo Hamato
Nickname: Chives

Your Boy Side

[] You love hoodies.
[x] You love jeans.
[x] Dogs are better than cats.
[x] It's hilarious when people get hurt.
[x] You've played with/against boys on a team.
[] Shopping is torture.
[x] Sad movies suck.
[x] You own an X-Box.
[x] Played with Hot Wheels cars as a kid.
[x] At some point in time you wanted to be a fire-fighter.
[x] You own a DS, PS2 or Sega.
[] You used to be obsessed with Power Rangers.
[] You watch sports on TV.
[x] Gory movies are cool.
[] You go to your dad for advice.
[] You own like a trillion caps.
[] You like going to football games.
[] You used to/do collect baseball cards.
[x] Baggy pants are comfy to wear.
[] It's kinda weird to have sleepovers with a bunch of people.
[x] Green, black, red, blue, or silver are one of your favourite colors.
[x] You love to go crazy and not care what people think.
[x] Sports are fun.
[x] Talk with food in your mouth.
Total = 15

Your Girl Side

[] You wear lip gloss.
[] You love to shop.
[] You wear eyeliner.
[x] You have some of the same shirts in different colours.
[] You wear the colour pink.
[x] Go to your mum for advice.
[] You consider cheerleading a sport.
[] You hate wearing the colour black.
[] You like hanging out at the mall.
[] You like getting manicures and/or pedicures.
[x] You like wearing jewellery.
[] Skirts are a big part of your wardrobe.
[] Shopping is one of your favourite hobbies.
[] You don't like the movie Star Wars.
[] You are/were in cheerleading, gymnastics or dance.
[x] It takes you around 1 hour to shower, get dressed, and put on make-up and accessories
[x] You smile a lot more than you should.
[x] You have more than 10 pairs of shoes.
[] You care about what you look like.
[] You like wearing dresses when you can.
[] You like wearing body spray/perfume/cologne.
[x] Used to play with dolls as little kid.
[] Like putting make-up on someone else for the joy of it.
[] Like taking pictures of yourself with your cell phone/camera when you're bored
Total-7

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HowManyDragons Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
Hey, thanks so much for the watch! :huggle:
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Meecha-Tuck-13 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you for the watch :)
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EvekiClival Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
no problem. :)
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thanx for the watch! :tighthug:
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EvekiClival Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome
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StrawberrySquirrel Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
Thank you for the favorite!
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EvekiClival Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome
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Ever-everafter Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Thankyou for the favourites! :D
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EvekiClival Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome
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Thanks for the fav!
Adorable icon, btw.
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